A Revision of the installment of my Fan made series, Man Of Steel + Vampire Which introduces the Girl who can Phase through Dimensions, Phantom Girl. I made a better plot because I wasn’t satisfied with the original.
Millions of years ago on the planet Krypton, before its demise, the ancient scientist Kem-El has seeded a planet called Bgztl with a race of beings who were capable phasing through solid object and shifting to other Dimensions known as the Bgztlians. While working on a device capable of mimicing the Bgztlians ability to dimension travel, he discovered a phantasmic dimension which he dubbed the Phantom Zone. The Phantom Zone Contained a creature that only kills people with a cold heart, making The Kryptonian scientist believed that the phantom zone was a perfect place to hide Bgztl ad it’s inhabits so their planet can be kept out of harm’s way. So he transported the planet to the Phantom Zone where it remains.
Bgztlians have had run ins with thing that were brought to their home dimension by their outside neighbors, the Kryptonian used the phantom zone as a prison to hold Kryptonian prisoners by freezing them in suspended animation and is then sent into the phantom zone. Though their minds and personalities remain intact, they can no longer physically interact with any other being. This includes direct physical contact as well as the power of speech. Communication within the Phantom Zone is done so by telepathy. As the Phantom Zone exists outside of space/time, those within it are no longer subject to the rigors of age or illness, rendering them effectively immortal – and they also require no sleep, food or air. However they remain frozen is suspended animation so that they can’t interact in the zone itself and the Bgztlians have no problem once so ever.
The Bgztlians seem to be fascinated with the Kryptonians. Apparently, the planet Bgztl exists in exactly the same space as Krypton except in another dimension. And over the years, Kryptonians were believed to be ghosts or phantoms.
Years later, after Krypton Exploded, Bgztl was intending on finding any survivors of the cataclysm. they started by searching for the Kryptonian criminals who were banished to their home dimension but the criminals were all killed off by a being named Aethyr who was the Bgztlian’s protector. They then searched from planet to planet but they could not find a living Kryptonian soul. However, 17 years later a teenage Bgztlian girl named Tinya Wazzo discovered a message from supposedly the last survivor of krypton named Kal-El and she asked if she can investigate this planet Earth in attempt to find the last Descendent of her race’s Creator. So she leaves the phantom zone in search of the last survivor of krypton by tracing the Message’s location.
Meanwhile on earth Clark Kent (Kal-El/Superman) has been wondering something after the metropolis incident, when he sent Zod’s insurgents into a black hole, he wondered what the inside of the phantom zone was actually like. While this is going on he is broken out of his train of thought when Ms. Nekonome asks him to read a page out loud, which makes him feel like he is having déjà-vu.
Meanwhile Tinya Wazzo has finally found the planet, Earth. After arriving to her destination, she discovered that the signal the message came from is hidden within a giant invisible barrier but it is no problem for her since she is capable of phasing through solid objects and dimensions. After phasing through the barrier she sees a creepy looking building surrounded by a lush forest and decides to investigate further.
During lunch the gang is all sitting around at a table having a conversation that is newspaper related when all of sudden Yukari sees a face coming out of her bowl of ramen but disappears into the bowl which freaks the witching out. Her squeals get the other attention wondering what the witching is freaked out about. Yukari explains to what she saw, but Kurumu says that she is hallucinating and is being a big baby about it which starts up another fight. Then Clark decided to see if Yukari is telling the truth speaking loudly to whoever is messing with them to come out and show him or herself. Then suddenly the same head from before began to phase out of the table along with a feminine body that was clad in a white alien leotard and wore a visor on her face. The gang was surprised at this, because it is not often you see a sexy feminine figure emerge from a table like a ghost. Yukari cries out to everyone that she was not kidding around when she saw something in her ramen. After the monster girls thought that she was some kind of ghost, the girl spoke up asking for a Kal-El. After Clark says he is Kal-El, the strange girl tackles him with a loving hug and mashed his face in her breasts, saying at long last she has found the last survivor, however this makes the other girls shout out in anger to let him go. Clark mumbled in her breasts that she must be another alien who responded to his message.
Afterwards the girl introduces herself as Tinya Wazzo from the planet Bgztl a planet which exists within the phantom zone and exists in the same spot where krypton used to be. Her race that is capable of phasing through dimensions and solid objects was created by Kem-El and was transported to the Zone in order for their powers to be protected for unknown reasons. The part where she mentioned his ancestor caught Clark’s attention. Just like Orchid, and Lurornu and the Carggites, Tinya and her fellow Bgztlians were also another one of Kal’s ancestor’s experiments which makes him wonder what else Kem-El was working on.
Later that evening, in Clark’s dorm, Clark and Tinya were sitting on the bed, having a private conversation about how Clark was launched from his dying planet and raised on earth by humans, and how he made lots of friends and eventually Kara joined him. But Tinya is happy that she has finally found some survivors so she can report back to her race. Clark then asks her what powers she has and if she can demonstrate them, which Tinya is happy to. She then asks Clark to grab her hand then he and the ‘Phantom Girl’ suddenly fade through the floor.
After Clark opens his eyes he sees that he is in some other place completely. The two of them are sitting on floating island with strange glowing flowers and in the distance; he can see other floating islands. Tinya says that this place is where she comes to think and get away from the phantom zone. Suddenly Tinya gets on all fours and starts Crawling onto the Kryptonian which surprises him and gets his attention. Tinya blushes, saying that she had to get them out of that dimension so that no one can bother them while she attempts to finally unite both their races by making a hybrid child. Clark tries reasoning with her saying that he is not ready for stuff like that because of his responsibilities. After a few minutes of trying to convince her, Tinya finally gets off of Clark and says that she can wait until she is ready then she escorts the two of them out of the Dimension.
The next day, the girls have gotten into another fight after learning that the Bgztlian has got enrolled into the academy. . .
· Instead of having Bzgtl living in the same space as earth in another dimension, I changed it to having Bgztl living in the Same space as Krypton in the Phantom Zone.
· In this series the Bgztlians were another one of Kem-El’s Seeded Bio-Genetically-engineered humanoids. Like the Carggites.
· In this series, Kem-El was actually the first to discover the phantom zone.
· I tried to add something that the Legion of Superheroes Phantom Girl had, Like those haie braids and cheek plates.
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