A revision of the installment of my fan made series, Man of Steel + Vampire, which introduces the Farm-girl from space with Electrokinetic powers, Ayla Ranzz also knows as Lightning Lass. I made a better storyline because I wasn’t satisfied with the original.
Far off in another galaxy, there lays a planet called Winath. The planet is the most agranian of all in the universe. If that is not enough to comprehend, the inhabitants known as the Winathians, are almost all born as fraternal twins. The planet is a peaceful one at that, farming a variety of plant and animal life and the planet’s environment is extremely beautiful. However this chain of events leads us to our story of a certain Winathian.
The Winathans have belief in a supernatural myth on their planet about a supernatural being known as Vaildus, the Lord of Lighting. The Ranzz family has been the head of the cult that worships Validus. Mostly everyone is born having a twin but the First son of the Ranzz parents was Mekt Ranzz, the only Winathian to be born a single child, which was a bad omen on Winath. Then two other children came into place, Garth and Ayla Ranzz. Everyone on the planet admired Ayla and her beauty while Garth however this caused Mekt to harbor an irrational hate for his younger siblings that stems from jealousy. However something will eventually lead to an event that will change the young Winath beauty’s life forever
One day, Winath receives a message from a Kal-El from a planet called ‘Earth’. After hearing the message, the cult decides to send the three Ranzz siblings to investigate to planet, since they don’t have anything in their agricultural records about anything of Earth.
While the Three Ranzz siblings are traveling, they ended up being stranded on a Planet called Korbal. The planet’s atmosphere is nothing but massive storm clouds. All over the planet’s surface are intense moisture-laden air masses encountering the sharp spiky mountains generating a bunch of electrons; this means the planet is constantly having fierce lightning storms all over the planet every day. These constant lighting storms have also changed life on Korbal as well. The electromagnetic field in the atmosphere is so intense that plants thrive on the planet like crazy because the intense EM field changes the electric charges in plants effect hormones controlling plant growth, which causes them to grow like crazy and also adapt and become immune to lightning strikes. The native creatures have also undergone changes; they to have also evolved immunity to high voltage lightning and developed the ability to generate their own electricity in their bodies.
When the Ranzz’s shuttle-craft crash lands on the surface of Korbal, Garth attempts to turn the shuttlecraft into a giant Lightning rod, but the siblings’ constant heartbeats and production of positive electrons, causes them to be constantly struck by millions of lightning bolts, with billions of volts going through their entire body; causing them to lose consciousness. When the three have awoken they discovered that the lightning have given them electro kinetic powers which they were able to use to recharge the shuttle and fly out of Korbal. They then continue their journey in finding Earth.
after tracing to where the message originated, the three Ranzz siblings finally find earth and lands near the point of origination. Ayla recommends that two of them should go investigate while one of them stays behind and guard the ship. The twins both volunteer to go which leaves Mekt to guard the ship, mumbling in disappointment. When the twins exit the ship, Ayla discovers a tunnel near close to where they landed and detect that the signal is coming from whatever is on the other side of the tunnel.
When they arrive on the other side, they find an ocean of blood and a path leading into a creepy but beautiful forest full of life. Garth then sees a strange man leaning on the side of a yellow vehicle smoking a cigar. After confronting him Ayla asks the man where they can find this Kal-El Mikado Ryouko.
Meanwhile on Earth, Clark Kent (Kal-El/Superman) an Moka and the others are all in the library searching for any info on electronic circuits, with Clark researching at the speed of 5 minutes for some project that he and the girls have been working on. Suddenly they are interrupted by a voice on the intercom saying that he must report to the nurse’s office. After thinking about this, Clark thinks that Mikado may be up to something again.
When Clark arrives he sees Mikado taking to two people, after Clark shows his presence, the two turned to face him. One was a boy about his age with dark red hair while one was a beautiful teenage girl with dirty gold-blonde hair and matching eyes and they are both wearing green jumpsuits. The two greet themselves saying that they responded to his message and explain the other reason they are here. Mikado says that she and the girls can show Garth Pamela’s garden to show him the agricultural plants while she tells Clark to keep Ayla Company. however some of the girls argue with this idea but have no other choice.
After Garth, Mikado and the others leave the two alone, Clark asks the female Winathian what her people do on her planet. She then responds saying that the planet is Agricultral and all of the Winathians are farmers and it is the planets job to farm and feed the universe. The Agricultural thing on her planet fascinates Clark since he was raised on a farm and it was his adopt father’s job to farm and feed people. Then Clark asks Ayla if she wants something to eat and he opens his bag and pulls out a loaf of bread. After giving her a piece of bread, Ayla eats it which makes her starry eyed. She then asks what this bread is made of. Clark says that it is made of wheat which is a plant that is grown on farm. This fascinates Ayla because there has no wheat on Winath so she cannot make bread. While sitting on the sick bed, and Ayla still happily eating her piece of bread, Clark asks her what she is capable of doing. Ayla says after that incident on Korbal She has gained the power to create high voltage of electricity. She then starts to feel embarrassed like something is bothering her. She then says unlike her brothers, every time she charges up her electric powers, she feels some intense fuzzy pleasure that drives her crazy. Then after thinking about it, Ayla stars gasping, face flushed, blushing madly, breathing heavily, panting, eyes shut, covers the area between her legs and she lets out a loud sensual moan that her body starts sparking with electricity. Instead of feeling pain from electricity, it makes her feel aroused. Then, unable to control herself, she then crawls on all fours toward Clark with the poor Kryptonian backed up to the side of the sick bed and then climbs onto him and starts rubbing her breasts and crotch against him, creating static electricity. Clark hope that the two can get back soon from Ivy’s garden
Meanwhile in the new Eden, Pamela Isly is showing Garth, Mikado and the other girls all the plants that are capable of grow edible fruit like Tomatoes, Apples, Citrus, etc. Garth in taking notes on what earth can provide for consumption. And he is not aware of what his sister is getting Clark into.
Back at the ship, a couple hours have gone by and Mekt was starting to feel board from sitting in the ship. He wasted to investigate to but just like everything his younger brother and sister had to go leaving him with the short end of the stick. All his life he was ostracized by most of his family including his siblings. Then Mekt decides to leave the ship go explore the tunnel himself to see what he can find. On the other side of the tunnel he follows the same path that his siblings followed to see what he could find. Then he suddenly sees a lone cute girl walking into the forest.
Back with Clark, Ayla is still feeling the sexual urges that her electricity has gave her. And she is still trying to relieve the urges by trying to force herself on Clark but Clark tries desperately to gently push her away. Just then ruby comes into the room and notices the sight in front of her, seeing a dirty blonde haired girl straddling Clark. Catching the girl in the act, angers ruby, saying that she should be doing that to Clark because she is his ‘Toy’. Then Clark tries to ask Ruby what she is doing here. Then ruby says that Gin was watching a horrible scene unfold.
A few minutes go bye and everyone is back in the nurse’s room all surrounding a girl who is on a sick bed. According to the information gin provided with his pictures, Garth and Ayla are completely shocked to see their older brother Mekt trying molesting the girl. Apparently Gin said that Mekt was trying to molest the girl but the girl kept struggling and screaming for help and Mekt used some electricity to stop her heart. How gin knew this is because he put his ear up to the girls chest and her heart isn’t beating. Kurumu asks Gin if that is all he did, which gin flinches and says yes but some photos fall out of his jacket pocket revealing Gin’s hand lifting up the girls skirt to take a picture of her panties. This causes Kurumu and Yukari to attack him calling him a peeping pervert. Ayla then says that she needs to save this girl in order to get more answers. Then she puts her fists on the girl’s chest and uses her electricity to star her heart ups again like a defibrillator. After girl wakes up from cardiac arrest and gasps for air, she notices that she is n the nurses office surrounded by a bunch of people. Garth then asks what happened to her. After remembering her incident, the starts to tear up saying between sobs that “horrible person” did try to molest her and she was desperately screaming for help but that was the last thing she could remember and the girl breaks down crying. Listening to this, Garth and Ayla walk out the girl with Clark and the others follow behind. Clark asks the twins where they are going, Garth says that Mekt must pay for his crime and he must not be allowed to escape.
After arriving outside the tunnel, Ayla and Garth are shocked to see that the ship is gone. Now the two may be unable to return to Winath. Then Mikado walks in saying that she has got a ship and she can get them to Winath in just about a few minutes faster than their shuttlecraft. Clark says that he will go with him but Garth asks Clark and his friend to stay out of this, saying that this is family business and that he and Ayla will handle these themselves. After Mikado’s ship takes off, Ayla and Garth are willing to reveal their older brother of what he truly is.
Later, back on Winath, Mekit arrives on the planet attempting to lie to his family saying that his sibling were brutally killed by and the people of earth but he was able to escape; and that the whole message was just a trap for them. He was on his way home to tell them but both Ayla and Garth Beat were there with unhappy looks on their faces and his parents faces. He was surprises that they both beat him to Winath. Then Garth demands room him why he molested that poor earth girl. But mekt doesn’t respond instead she charges a bolt of lightning at them, knocking them back. Then he tries to make it back to the shuttlecraft but Garth and Ayla chase after him.
After they catch up to him Garth attacks him with his lightning but for some strange reason Mekt’s Lightning is stronger than his siblings. During the fight grabs a long broken piece of metal and slams it into Garth’s heart as Ayla cries out to her brother. After Garth falls to the ground, Ayla becomes enraged and attacks her older brother with her lightning but apparently her lightning has no effect on him since he too has lightning powers. Mekt then knocks her away. But Ayla begs to him why he is doing this. Mekt finally responds saying that he has been living in her and Garth’s shadows for too long and they have always been popular with the people her while he was rewarded with nothing. Then he eyes her from head to toe saying it is a real shame that he he has to end her life, because if they weren’t related, he would have a lot of fun with her right now; before blasting her with a huge bolt of lightning. Feeling the intense pleasure from the lightning, cusing her to gaspe and loudly moan in pleasure. When the sensual feeling from the lightning bolt was way too much for her, she screamed out in pleasure and orgasm , causing her urethra fluids to spill out onto the ground. Mekt stops firing his lightning bolts so Ayla can catch her breath.
Afterwards he turns around and heads for his ship saying that one sibling kill is enough for one day and that he will get her next time. Suddenly a fast object slams into the ship from above causing a shockwave, and knocking Mekt back. When the dust clears up, Mekt sees Superman with his arms folded and his cape fluttering in the air and is standing on Mekt’s now flattened and demolished shuttlecraft. Then Superman humiliates Mekt’s intelligence asking him if he really believe that he can just walk away. Then superman is shocked sees Garth lying on the ground in I puddle of blood while Ayla was lying nearby as well. Superman walks past Mekt to see if they are still alive but in the corner of the Kryptonian’s eye, he sees Mekt grin, thrilled that Kal-El was too late. However this causes the man of steel to snap and beat Mekt into a bloody pulp. Mekt tries to fight back with his devastating lightning bolts but Superman is too invulnerable for his lightning to affect him. Taking advantage of Mekt’s helplessness predicament, Superman brutally beats Mekt face, stoving his head in. but before he can kill him, the man of steel stops himself, knowing that he would be going too far. Then Mekt gets sup spiting blood from his now messed up stoved in face, assuming that the cause of superman’s rage could be that Mekt harmed Ayla and asks Superman if he loves her. But superman doesn’t say anything. Suddenly Mekt is stabbed in the heart from behind. He looks down to see it was the same sharpened metal from before that he stabbed Garth with. He turns around to see it was Ayla who stabbed him. then the “Lightning Lass” says that Mekt is no brother of hers before using her power to suck Mekt dry of his electricity and energy basically killing him.
Afterward, Ayla feels like she is about to fall down, not until Clark catches her in his arms bridal style. She looks up at her red and blue savior and blushes asking him if he really does love her. But Clark does not say anything. But Alya says he doesn’t have to talk because she can sense his heart beating. Just before the Winathian was about to kiss the Kryptonian, they both her coughing coming from Garth. Clark lets go of Ayla as she rushes over and cradles in her dying brother’s head in her arms, sobbing. Garth says that he loves his sister and then tells Clark that he must take care of Ayla, before dying in his sister’s arms. Then Ayla bursts into loud sobs and hugs her dead brother. Then Clark comes in and pats her on the shoulder, which causes her to bury her face into his chest, crying hard for her loss.
A few weeks go by and Moka and the other girls are seen walking through the hallways of the academy, talking about how Ayla returned home for her brothers funeral. And hopefully everything will go back to normal. When the girls open the door, they see Clark being hugged by Ayla who says that she loves him to death. They even notice that she wearing a different outfit from before. in place of her old green jumpsuit, she is now wearing a blue leotard with matching gloves and boots, white sleeves and legging and glowing yellow triangles. Ayla turns to say hi to them saying that she is now enrolled into the school and now she is love with Clark. They girls look at her with veins and she continues to rub her breasts against Clark’s chest creating more static electricity. Then Kurumu comes in and grabs Clark away and then both Alya and Kurumu are both fighting over Clark’s body before Ayla stuns the succubus with mild electricity causing her to fall to the ground.
· Lightning lass is more powerful than her comic counterpart.
· Every time lightning Lass uses her electro kinetic powers, it causes her to feel sexually aroused because the electric field affects her hormones for sexual arousal..
· Like her brothers, Ayla cannot be harmed by lightning, but unlike Garth and Mekt, Ayla is sexually pleasured by the feeling of lightning and other sorts of electricity
· Like Sharks and electric eels, Lightning Lass has electroreceptors and electrocytes hidden in her large breasts that connects to her brain and allow her brain and body to detect the electromagnetic field and the heartbeat of living things. These cells also help her navigate through dark areas.
· When she is sexually aroused she starts sparking electricity. And when she masturbates by rubbing her crotch and breasts, she creates static electricity that pleasures her even more.
· When Ayla orgasms she shoots bolts of lightning everywhere like an explosion.
· Lightning Lass can also create extreme lightning storms.
· Lightning Lass can also manipulate magnetic fields and travel by lightning bolts.
· Lightning Lad appears but is killed off in the end
· Lightning Lass’s favorite food is bread, because there is no wheat growing on her home planet.
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I don’t own DC comics or Rosario+Vampire
Phantom Girl: coming soon
Triplicate girl: Link